This is best shit you made so far man, just gotta ease up on the indulgences. Harold bloom stuff would of been eh, but the wink was too much. I see what you were trying to do but it didn't go through right, instead of extending the theme it just said "I'm clever and embarrassed, BUT i also want you to know that". Winks almost always do. I i know indulgence is your thing but NO WINKS
The second half was absolute heat, comic was fire.
when you’re right you’re right. I just thought it should work and when it didn’t was like no it should work. It had no right to not work when it should work. I kept it in out of principle. That it should’ve worked.
yeah this ones just for me
This is best shit you made so far man, just gotta ease up on the indulgences. Harold bloom stuff would of been eh, but the wink was too much. I see what you were trying to do but it didn't go through right, instead of extending the theme it just said "I'm clever and embarrassed, BUT i also want you to know that". Winks almost always do. I i know indulgence is your thing but NO WINKS
The second half was absolute heat, comic was fire.
when you’re right you’re right. I just thought it should work and when it didn’t was like no it should work. It had no right to not work when it should work. I kept it in out of principle. That it should’ve worked.